Esther Sylvester

Hey retro! You new here? If you are, then welcome to YWS! This was a gripping piece. Well done. However, just looking at this, I can tell that this piece ...

Hi there! Here to review as requested. Now, reading this, it almost seems like this piece could stand alone from the other part. This has such a one shot feel ...

Wow, Isha! This totally rocks! I wish I could do that. Did you really do this? It is so easy to photoshop these days, but with YOU, I believe it. ...

Welcome to YWS,f1shes! (I like your username.) I am Esther, and I'm pleased to meet you. This site is a great place for developing your writing skills. Epic poetry huh? ...

Hey lily! So this was good. I've never been fond of vampire novels-ever, but this WAS interesting. And creepy. Good job with the creepiness. PLOT: Well, it is creepy. The ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Esther, pleased to meet you. Okay, this is interesting. I like this. PLOT: Interesting premise. I like stories like these. I want to know ...

Hey Sarebear. Tis Esther her for reviewing. This is very pretty. I like the meaningful tone to it. Since these are lyrics, you should clearly mark your chorus. That way ...

Ooh, very nice bookslug. Let's see if I can be of any help here. I don't have to much photography experience but I can tell you if a picture is ...

Holy flying discus Batman! This was fantastic. I loved every second of it. Gah! I wish I could read more. I seriously, seriously, wish this wasn't a one shot so ...

Hi! I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. I like this! Let's get down to the details, shall we? I like the main character's character, and the endearing ...

This is pretty good. I like the poem all the way to here: so I guess that were never gonna find out till one of us ask and the says ...

Hey Raven, what's up? I'll be reviewing you today. I haven't read the previous parts but I will give it a shot. Good hook here at the beginning-it kept the ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! Have you posted on the Welcome Board yet? It's a great way to meet new people. It is under the "Community" tab. What a clever twist ...

Welcome to YWS! This site is a great way to hone your writing skills. Every one is friendly here and I hope that you will private message me if you ...

Back for another review! This is addicting. I like this scene. It is building up to something big, I bet. My biggest complaint here is the lack of context. You ...